Monday, April 29, 2013

"Petition" essay


Petition to Waive the University Mathematics Requirement

By Gordon Adams, Arizona State University Student

Standards Committee Members,

[1] I am a 43-year-old member of the Pawnee Tribe of Oklahoma and a very

nontraditional student currently pursuing Justice Studies at the Arizona State

University (ASU) College of Public Programs. I entered college as the first step toward

completion of my goal becoming legal counsel for my tribe, and statesman.

[2] I come before this committee in good faith to request that ASU suspend, in my

special case, its mathematics requirement for undergraduate degree completion so I

may enter the ASU College of Law during Fall 1993. The point I wish to make to this

committee is this: I do not need algebraic skills; I will never use algebra in my intended

profession; and, if forced to comply with ASU’s algebra requirement, I will be

needlessly preventing from graduating in time to enter law school next fall and face an

idle academic year before my next opportunity in 1994. I will address each of these

points in turn, but a few words concerning my academic credentials are in order first.

[3] Two years ago, I made a vow of moral commitment to seek out and confront

injustice. In September of 1990, I enrolled in college. Although I had only the benefit of a

ninth grade education, I took the General Equivalency Diploma (GED) examination and

placed in the top ten percent of those, nationwide, who took the test. On the basis of this

score I was accepted into Scottsdale Community College (SCC). This step made me the

first in my entire family, and practically in my tribe, to enter college. During my first

year at SCC I maintained a 4.0 GPA, I was placed on the President’s list twice, was

active in the Honors Program, received the Honors Award of Merit in English

Humanities, and was conferred an Honors Scholarship (see attached) for the Academic

year of 1991-1992 which I declined, opting to enroll in ASU instead.

[4] At the beginning of the 1991 summer semester, I transferred to ASU. I chose to

graduate from ASU because of the courses offered in American Indian studies, an

important field ignored by most other Universities but necessary to my commitment. At

ASU I currently maintain a 3.6 GPA, although my cumulative GPA is closer to 3.9. I am

a member of the Honors and Justice Colleges, was appointed to the Dean’s List, and

awarded ASU’s prestigious Maroon and Gold Scholarship twice. My academic standing

is impeccable. I will enter the ASU College of Law to study Indian and criminal law

during the Fall of 1993 if this petition is approved. Upon successful completion of my

juris doctorate I will return to Oklahoma to become active in the administration of

Pawnee tribal affairs as tribal attorney and advisor, and vigorously prosecute our right

to sovereignty before the Congress of the United States.

[5] When I began my “college experience,” I set a rigid time schedule for the

completion of my goal. By the terms of that self-imposed schedule, founded in my belief

that I have already wasted many productive years, I allowed myself thirty-five months

in which to achieve my Bachelor of Science degree in Justice Studies, for indeed justice

is my concern, and another thirty-six months in which to earn my juris doctorate

summa cum laude. Consistent with my approach to all endeavors, I fell upon this task

with zeal. I have willingly assumed the burden of carrying substantial academic loads

during fall, spring and summer semesters. My problem now lies in the fact that in order

to satisfy the University’s math requirement to graduate I must still take MAT-106 and

MAT-117. I submit that these mathematics courses are irrelevant to my goals, and

present a barrier to my fall matriculation into law school.

[6] Upon consideration of my dilemma, the questions emerged: Why do I need

college algebra (MAT-117)? Is college algebra necessary for studying American Indian

law? Will I use college algebra in my chosen field? What will the University gain or

lose, from my taking college algebra or not? I decided I should resolve these questions.

[7] I began my inquiry with the question: “Why do I need college algebra (MAT-

117)?” I consulted Mr. Jim ____ of the Justice College and presented this question to

him. He referred to the current ASU catalog and delineated the following answer: I

need college algebra (1) for a minimum level of math competency in my chosen field,

and (2) to satisfy the university math requirement in order to graduate. My reply to the

first answer is this: I already possess ample math skills, both practical and academic;

and, I have no need for algebra in my chosen field. How do I know this? During the

spring 1992 semester at ASU I successfully completed introductory algebra (MAT-077),

scoring the highest class grade on one test (see attached transcript and test). More

noteworthy is the fact that I was a machine and welding contractor for fifteen years. I

used geometry and algebra commonly in the design of many welded structures. I am

proficient in the use of Computer Assisted Design (CAD) programs, designing and

drawing all my own blueprints for jobs. My blueprints and designs are always

approved by city planning departments. For example, my most recent job consisted of

the manufacture, transportation and installation of one linear mile of anodized,

aluminum hand-railing at a luxury resort condo on Maui, Hawaii. I applied extensive

use of math to calculate the amount of raw materials to order, the logistics of mass

production and transportation for both men and materials from Mesa to Maui, the job

site installation itself, and cash flow. I have successfully completed many jobs of this

nature all without a mathematical hitch. As to the application of math competency in

my chosen field, I can guarantee this committee that there will not be a time in my

practice of Indian law that I will need algebra. If an occasion ever occurs that I need

algebra, I will hire a mathematician, just as I would engineer if I need engineering, or a

surgeon if I need an operation.

[8] I then contacted Dr. _____ of the ASU Mathematics Department and presented

him with the same question: “Why do I need college algebra?” He replied: (1) for a

wellrounded education; (2) to develop creative thinking; and (3) to satisfy the university

math requirement in order to graduate. Responding to the first answer I have a “wellrounded

education.” My need is for a specific education in justice and American Indian

law. In fact, I do not really need the degree to practice Indian law as representative of

my tribe, just the knowledge. Regarding the second, I do not need to develop my

creative thinking. It has been honed to a keen edge for many years. For example, as a

steel contractor, I commonly create huge, beautiful and intricate structures from raw

materials. Contracting is not my only experience in creative thinking. For twenty-five

years I have also enjoyed the status of being one of this country’s foremost designers

and builders of race bikes. Machines I have designed and brought into existence from

my imagination have topped some of Japan and Europe’s best engineering efforts. To

illustrate this point, in 1984 I rode a bike of my own design to an international victory

over Honda, Suzuki, Laverda, BMW and Yamaha. I have excelled at creative thinking

my entire life. I called it survival.

[9] Expanding on the question of why I need college algebra, I contacted a few

friends who are practicing attorneys. All responded to my question in similar manner.

One, Mr. Billy _____, Esq., whose law firm is in Tempe, answered my two questions as

follows: “When you attended law school, were there any courses you took which

required algebra?” His response was “no.” “Have you ever needed algebra during the

many years of your practice?” Again, his response was “no.” All agreed there was not a

single occasion when they had need for algebra in their professional careers.

[10] Just to make sure of my position, I contacted the ASU College of Law, and

among others, spoke to Ms. Sierra _____. I submitted the question “What law school

courses will I encounter in which I will need algebra?” The unanimous reply was, they

know of none.

[11] I am not proposing that the number of credit hours I need for graduation be

lowered. In fact, I am more than willing to substitute another course or two in its place.

I am not trying to get out of anything hard or distasteful, for that is certainly not my

style. I am seeking only to dispose of an unnecessary item in my studies, one which will

prevent me from entering law school this fall breaking my stride. So little holds up so

much.

[12] I agree that a young adult directly out of high school may not know that he

needs algebraic skills. Understandably, he does not know what his future holds but I

am not that young adult. I claim the advantage. I know precisely what my future holds

and that future holds no possibility of my needing college algebra.

[13] Physically confronting injustice is my end. On reservations where government

apathy allows rapacious pedophiles to pose as teachers; in a country where a million

and a half American Indians are held hostage as second-rate human beings whose

despair results in a suicide, alcohol and drug abuse rate second to no other people; in

prisons where helpless inmates are beaten like dogs by sadistic guards who should be

the inmates this is the realm of my chosen field the disenfranchised. In this

netherworld, algebra and justice exist independently of one another.

[14] In summary, I am convinced that I do not need college algebra for a minimum

level of math competency in my chosen field. I do not need college algebra for a well

rounded education, nor to develop my creative thinking. I do not need algebra to take

the LSAT. I do not need algebra for any courses in law school, nor will I for any purpose

in the practice of American Indian law. It remains only that I need college algebra in

order to graduate.

[15] I promise this committee that ASU’s integrity will not be compromised in any

way by approving this waiver. Moreover, I assure this committee that despite not

having a formal accreditation in algebra, I will prove to be nothing less than an asset to

this University and its Indian community, both to which I belong, and I will continue to

set a standard for integrity, excellence and perseverance for all who follow. Therefore, I

ask this committee, for all the reasons described above, to approve and initiate the

waiver of my University mathematics requirement.

[signed]

Gordon Adams

Essay 3


Essay 3: Transportation Alternatives

 For years Portland and Vancouver residents have been debating what to do about the old Interstate Bridge on I-5. Residents on both sides of the river—as well as all the others who uses this stretch of I-5—agree that the current bridge slows down traffic and reduces highway safety. However, what should be done to deal with the problem is an open question. This local debate is just one of thousands of debates going on worldwide about how cities should deal with traffic congestion. 

Everybody (except maybe billboard advertisers) complains about traffic congestion, and with good reason. Traffic congestion creates tons of air pollution, decreases highway safety, lowers our economic productivity, and stresses us out. We also know that alternatives to congestion are available, such as buses, light rail, bike paths, and carpooling. Why, then, do we not make greater use of available transportation alternatives? This question is the focus point of our third out-of-class essay for this course.

 For our first reading on the subject, I would like for you to study an article from US News and World Report. The author’s name is Will Sullivan; the title of the article is “Road Warriors.” It appeared in the May 7, 2007 issue of the magazine and can be found on EBSCO. Please read this article actively to begin our conversation about transportation alternatives.

 When you do read the article, you will notice that the article I have chosen does not answer the question I have posed for this essay. That’s okay; the article will nevertheless provide good background on the topic and may give you some insight about where to look next for answers. Also, this article will help you deal with a second question that I want to pose for this essay: once you have determined why we don’t use current transportation alternatives, what can we do as a society to help solve the traffic problem? This type of question, calling for a proposal, requires that you find out why the problem exists in the first place.

Like most of our papers, this essay presents you with a persuasive writing situation. This essay includes elements of a proposal, but there are also elements of another type of persuasive writing: cause and effect. In the coming days, we’ll explore different ways to write this kind of paper.

 In grading this paper, I will look at all six criteria on your “What Makes a Good English 101 Essay?” sheet: focus, development, audience awareness, organization, correctness, and citations. I expect your paper to be word processed, printed on regular paper in 12 point type, double-spaced, in an academic font such as Times New Roman, spell checked, and proofread. Regarding the grammar, I will be evaluating you on all of the grammar principles that we have covered in class: complete sentences, agreement, comma usage, parallelism, minor punctuation, and sentence unity. Regarding citations, you will need to refer to at least two recent (2006 or later) periodical articles from EBSCO or ProQuest. You will need to provide effective MLA citations and a complete MLA works cited page (not a bibliography). The length of this paper should be about 1000 words.

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Writing tutor

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Tuesday, March 19, 2013

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Essay 1


Essay #1: The School Lunch Wars

 

All academic writing involves responding to the writing of others. Academic writing is like a long-running conversation, in which each essay answers a previous text in some way, either to agree with it, disagree with it, analyze it, or apply it to some new situation. As you might imagine, the most important first step in responding to another text is to make sure you understand that text. Writing a summary is one of the best ways to prove to yourself and others that you understand a piece of writing.

 

For our first essay this quarter, I’d like you to summarize a recent The Wilson Quarterly article titled “The School Lunch Wars.”  This article was written by Kristen Hinman and appeared in the Spring 2011 issue of the magazine; using this information, it should be easy for you to find the article using EBSCO (and, by the way, I would like you to use EBSCO to find the article, even though you can also find the article just by googling it).

 

After reading Hinman’s article, I would like you to write a summary of her argument in 1000 words or less. An essay of 1000 words is less than three pages long in double-spaced 12-point type, so your response will need to be both focused and economical. 

 

In grading this paper, I will look at all six criteria on the “What Makes a Good English 101 Essay?” section in the syllabus: focus, development, audience awareness, organization, correctness, and citations. I expect your paper to be word processed, using 12 point type, double-spaced, in an academic font such as Times New Roman, and proofread. Note, by the way, that proofreading is different from spell checking: your paper is likely to have more spelling and grammar errors if all you do is turn on the spell checker after writing your paper. I will also be evaluating your sentence grammar (that is, whether you are able to produce complete sentences), as well as your correct use of commas. At this point, I won’t be too much of a stickler on the finer points of MLA citations; however, to do well on this essay you need to understand the difference between a direct quote and a paraphrase, and you need to give a signal phrase for any outside piece of information you use.

DUE: ____________________________

WR 121 Outcomes


WR121 student learning outcomes

1.   Academic Discourse and Conventions

Upon successful completion of this course, students will be able to:

A.  Engage in and value a respectful and free exchange of ideas

B. Practice active reading of college-level texts, including: annotation, cultivation/development of vocabulary, objective summary, identification, and analysis of the thesis and main ideas of source material

C. Participate in class discussion and activities; speak, read, respond, and listen reflectively, understanding self as a part of a larger community

D. Appreciate and reflect on challenging points of view through reading and writing; measure another writer’s viewpoint against personal experience and assumptions and the experience of others

E. Use appropriate technologies in the service of writing and learning. For example: use word processing tools to prepare and edit formal writing assignments (spell check/grammar check, find and replace); understand the limitations of such tools; locate course materials and resources online; and use online communication tools such as e-mail

F. Word process and format final drafts with appropriate headings, titles, spacing, margins, demonstrating an understanding of MLA citation style

G. Demonstrate the ability to use Edited Standard Written English to address an academic audience

H. Use a writer's handbook and/or other resources for style, grammar, and citation

2.   Organization, Thesis and Development

Upon successful completion of this course, students will be able to:

A. Try more than one organizational strategy in essay drafts including reworking thesis statement

B. Write well-focused, logically organized, and well- transitioned essays, using introductions, discussion, and conclusions in which the relationship of ideas to the thesis and to one another is clear

C. Develop and organize essays using evidence that may include examples, illustration, and research to support ideas

D. Evaluate and synthesize ideas from own writing and the writing of others

E. Write at least one argumentative essay that demonstrates an understanding of the basic elements of argumentation including claims, support, logic, and credibility

3.   Audience, Purpose, and Voice

Upon successful completion of this course, students will be able to:

 

A.  Develop rhetorical competence:

 

i. Identify the roles played by situation, purpose, and audience in directing a writer’s choices, and make appropriate choices of tone, voice, and level of formality based on the essay’s genre and/or discourse community

 

ii. Assess knowledge, expectations and biases of audiences

 

iii. Anticipate questions an audience is likely to have and supply appropriate information

 

iv. Analyze how a writer’s tone and voice effect audiences’ perception of the writer

 

v. Identify the different levels of formality through vocabulary, syntax, and other conventions, and the situations in which they are appropriate

 

vi. Employ strategies of development appropriate for the purpose and audience, recognizing that effective writing usually

 

4.   Writing Process

Upon successful completion of this course, students will be able to:

 

A.  Explore the ideas of others in both informal and formal writing

 

B.  Recognize that strong organization, thesis, and development result from a recursive writing process

 

C.  Exercise original thought in selecting and narrowing writing topics

 

D.  Develop essays through a flexible writing process that proceeds from exploration and discovery, through drafting, peer review, revision, editing, and proofreading

 

E.  Work effectively and collaboratively with other writers to evaluate and revise essays , sharing work in process and providing constructive feedback to others according to established guidelines, and revise according to peer and instructor feedback

 

F.  Appraise own writing skills, abilities, and process and those of others, identifying strengths and addressing weaknesses

 

G.  Use available writing assistance

 

5.   Research and Documentation

Upon successful completion of this course, students will be able to:

A. Use a database and the Internet to locate information and evidence

B. Evaluate source materials for authority, currency, reliability, bias, sound reasoning and validity of evidence

C. Demonstrate an ability to summarize, paraphrase, and quote sources in a manner that distinguishes the writer's voice from that of his/her sources

D.  Produce at least one paper that demonstrates an ability to synthesize sources to support an assertive or argumentative thesis through summary, paraphrase, and integrated quotation

E. Credit source material using a discipline-appropriate documentation style

OWEAC (Oregon Writing & English Advisory Committee) Outcomes

Students will produce 3000-3500 words of final, revised draft copy, including one essay of at least 1000 words that integrates research.

Academic Discourse and Conventions
Organization, Thesis and Development
Audience, Purpose, and Voice
Writing Process
Research and Documentation
1.        Engage in and value a respectful and free exchange of ideas
2.        Practice active reading of college-level texts, including: annotation, cultivation/development of vocabulary, objective summary, identification, and analysis of the thesis and main ideas of source material
3.        Participate in class discussion and activities; speak, read, respond, and listen reflectively, understanding self as a part of a larger community
4.        Appreciate and reflect on challenging points of view through reading and writing; measure another writer’s viewpoint against personal experience and assumptions and the experience of others
5.       Use appropriate technologies in the service of writing and learning. For example: use word processing tools to prepare and edit formal writing assignments (spell check/grammar check, find and replace); understand the limitations of such tools; locate course materials and resources online; and use online communication tools such as e-mail
6.        Word process and format final drafts with appropriate headings, titles, spacing, margins, demonstrating an understanding of MLA citation style

7.        Demonstrate the ability to use Edited Standard Written English to address an academic audience
8.        Use a writer's handbook and/or other resources for style, grammar, and citation
1.        Try more than one organizational strategy in essay drafts including reworking thesis statement
2.        Write well-focused, logically organized, and well- transitioned essays, using introductions, discussion, and conclusions in which the relationship of ideas to the thesis and to one another is clear
3.        Develop and organize essays using evidence that may include examples, illustration, and research to support ideas
4.        Evaluate and synthesize ideas from own writing and the writing of others
5.       Write at least one argumentative essay that demonstrates an understanding of the basic elements of argumentation including claims, support, logic, and credibility
 
 
Develop rhetorical competence:
 
·         Identify the roles played by situation, purpose, and audience in directing a writer’s choices, and make appropriate choices of tone, voice, and level of formality based on the essay’s genre and/or discourse community

·         Assess knowledge, expectations and biases of audiences

·         Anticipate questions an audience is likely to have and supply appropriate information

·         Analyze how a writer’s tone and voice effect audiences’ perception of the writer

·         Identify the different levels of formality through vocabulary, syntax, and other conventions, and the situations in which they are appropriate
 
·         Employ strategies of development appropriate for the purpose and audience, recognizing that effective writing usually involves combinations of modes, including finding and integrating outside source material

1.       Explore the ideas of others in both informal and formal writing
 
2.       Recognize that strong organization, thesis, and development result from a recursive writing process

3.       Exercise original thought in selecting and narrowing writing topics

4.       Develop essays through a flexible writing process that proceeds from exploration and discovery, through drafting, peer review, revision, editing, and proofreading
 
5.       Work effectively and collaboratively with other writers to evaluate and revise essays , sharing work in process and providing constructive feedback to others according to established guidelines, and revise according to peer and instructor feedback
 
6.       Appraise own writing skills, abilities, and process and those of others, identifying strengths and addressing weaknesses
 
7.       Use available writing assistance
1.   Use a database and the Internet to locate information and evidence

2.   Evaluate source materials for authority, currency, reliability, bias, sound reasoning and validity of evidence

3.   Demonstrate an ability to summarize, paraphrase, and quote sources in a manner that distinguishes the writer's voice from that of his/her sources

4.    Produce at least one paper that demonstrates an ability to synthesize sources to support an assertive or argumentative thesis through summary, paraphrase, and integrated quotation

5.   Credit source material using a discipline-appropriate documentation style